- $500
Screenplay Analysis
- Coaching session
A Deep, Professional Breakdown of Your Script from Story to Structure
You’ve finished your screenplay — congratulations!
That’s no small feat. But before you start pitching, submitting, or producing… you need to know how your story lands.
This Screenplay Analysis gives you a comprehensive, no-fluff evaluation of your feature script (up to 115 pages) — so you can polish it to a professional standard and feel confident sharing it with the world.
What You’ll Get
1. Detailed Written Analysis (up to 2,500 words)
A page-by-page breakdown that highlights what’s working — and where your script could be stronger. You’ll receive actionable insights on:
Story structure and pacing
Character arcs and motivation
Dialogue flow and tone
Theme clarity and emotional impact
Market fit and reader engagement
2. One-Hour Video Call Review
We’ll go through your script together, unpack key notes, and discuss how to bring your story to its fullest potential.
3. Follow-Up Check-In (After 5 Days)
You’ll have time to process the feedback — and then send any follow-up questions or clarifications via email. I’ll personally respond to ensure you’re fully clear on next steps.
Perfect For You If:
You’ve completed a feature-length screenplay and want honest, professional feedback before submitting it.
You want to strengthen your story’s emotional arc, pacing, and dialogue.
You’re preparing to enter competitions, pitch producers, or attract representation.
You want specific guidance, not vague opinions.
How It Works:
Book your analysis — reserve your spot and submit your script (PDF, up to 115 pages).
Receive your in-depth written review within 10–14 days.
Join a one-hour video call to discuss your notes and next steps.
Get a follow-up check-in five days later to ask any lingering questions.
It is rare to find someone who bridges cultures, genres, and mediums with such confidence. Whether you are crafting the early chapters of a novel, restructuring a screenplay, or refining your novel, Shawn’s ability to elevate a story while empowering its creator is nothing short of remarkable.
Boris R.
Testimonials
Writers Say…
Canny
Excellent! I've been reading various screenwriting books, but Shawn's unique perspective on connecting these things is very valuable.
Shirley Junran
Excellent course! The teacher is very dedicated! He answers any questions promptly and provides very useful methodologies.
Thank you so much!
Angela Jiang
Shawn offers clear, constructive feedback that really lands. After one session, I felt a door had opened — and that real growth was actually within reach.
Take Your Screenplay from Good to Greenlight-Ready
You’ve already done the hard part — writing it. Now let’s make sure your story shines on the page.
Book Your Screenplay Analysis — $500
(Includes written review, one-hour video call, and follow-up support.)